Hello Hello Hello, it is me Meiana and this is called a pick-a-path story. I worked on this for so long. Please enjoy!
Hey! I'm back lets talk. What was your favourite part of my pick-a-path, please comment down below ok bye.
Oh hi again I forgot my blurb so.... here it is :)
My favourite part of doing this was probably doing the heaven and my message for you. And my least favourite part was linking it because you had to fix all of it and make sure it added up and all of that jazz. But im glad I finished it.
Ok Bye for real this time.
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, June 30, 2020
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hi mieana
ReplyDeletei love your pick a path story, this reminds me of a horror game when evil evie hits the girl on the head with the bat, next time you could maybe add something like entering a room where you have to do opsticles in order to get to your friend
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Thank you so much Briana! I will try to add obstacles next time I just didn't have enough time to do it. By the way it is Meiana not mieana but A+ for the effort
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