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Thursday, May 14, 2020

My writing that I have been working on for 1 or 2 weeks

On a warm nice day there was a group of 4 dust buddies. Their names were Kev, Duz, Nes, and Adm. They lived in a green modern house run by the richest man in the town. So what does that mean? Well he has a maid of course and maids try their best. They clean every corner and every single floor in the house and even under tables and what lives under the tables and rugs? DUST BUDDIES! So it's a struggle everyday for them to stay alive and not get sucked up by the vacuum.

When Nes and Duz were trying to sleep they could hear Kev and Adam playing animal crossing on a BIIIG Nintendo switch that the owner of the house’s son Steve had. After they did that they went to sleep. In the morning they could hear Steve rushing to get ready for school, Steve didn’t have enough time to eat a proper breakfast so he just grabbed some crackers from the white and shiney pantry. But on his way out he had dropped some of his crackers on the ground and keep in mind the dust buddies aren't usually hungry but when they saw that cracker hit the ground they had a look on their faces like they had not eaten in their entire life.

So once Steve left the house the dust buddies ran to the cracker apart for Kev because he felt like something was up. His stomach had sunk when he heard the doorbell go *DING DONG*. The dust buddies that were eating the cracker looked at each other then froze. The look on their faces was indescribable. The maid and the 3 other dust buddies were frozen once the maid came in and started up the vacuum cleaner she had the most evil look on her face. Kev motioned his hands for them to come back but they did not listen because they were still frozen as soon as she started up the vacuum Duz, Nes, and Adm unfroze and started booking it to the rug house but it was too late the maid was right on their tale until… *zoop* one by one they got sucked up by the vacuum the maid let out an evil cackle Kev was destroyed with sadness he had to think of a plan to get his friends. *Two hours later* Kev had whipped up a plan like a batter of cream. This was his plan: he would poison the maids' food so she would have to go to the toilet for a looooooooong time then when she was gone he would save his friends from the maid and it… WORKED as soon as the maid went on her break she was super hungry so she had a BIG spoonful and she was on that toilet for hours at least they thought until the maid saw the unplugged plug so she plugged it back in and as soon as it turned on you wont believe it but they made it what a relief when they made it out they had a thirsty taste of VENGEANCE so that’s exactly what they did.

Ok well that is it I hope you liked it ok bye bye :)

1 comment:

  1. Hi Meiana, I like your work your doing. maybe you should put some full-stops in the blog post because it looks like your blog post has no full-stops and check your spelling on the 2nd line.

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